but I also want to take care of the this instance: if I'm. It forcing you to think I'm not doing my job, I don't want you to think "church evil/good!" I want you to give you her perspective ONLY, and I always imagine "what is my reader getting for this? sre they curious?"

This is how she feels, but what do you think? How are you conceiving this scene? Writing for me, is laying questions you don't Have all the answers to, you never will but you can get a perspective, Sylvia, is scared but this is also "just a building" for someone else as we'll see

Also, notice how I'm playing with the composition, the church is always taller than the people, unless the humans (equals) are looking at each other, the mythos/ideal is always above them:

Again; remember, the perspective we get a fear of it because Sylvia is terrified, but what about the woman? She's calm Praying, For this book I wanted to play with this double notion

The next page I want to focus on composition: a triangle, the mythos always above, an unreachable force, this should comfort you, but it does not it makes you feel small, meaningless towards it, a place you fail to fill