Emblem(?) ENGAGE!

Do these look like "manga/comic" panels? I was always under the impression that I needed to use screen tones and sharp, bold lines for comics, but using a pencil brush for lineart and toning feels way better for me.

My older panels for comparison. I feel my style works way better with softer pencil brushes. A good point of comparison would be Seishin's hair.

Brodia and Elusia

Wing