The first version of this shot and the latest version. There can really only be one focal point at a time, and blurring/enlarging Takamori in the foreground makes you more focused on Ina in the BG. That and moving Ame further into the back creates a feeling of depth and space. 4/

The reason I started this board is because the projects I usually work on are all comedy and action, and I don't really get a chance to just soak in the atmosphere of a scene. I wanted to give it a go, and see if I can't learn something in the attempt! 5/5

The quality of my clean boards can vary wildly. 😆

This might be the most Ame-like expression I've ever drawn?

Since I was requested, here are the drawings from Ina's sketchpad/clipboard from the campfire animatic.